GT Writing 23-06-2020

Task-1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

Write at least 150 words.

You saw an advertisement for a tennis course in England but you have one or two problems and can’t stay the whole course.
Write a letter to the course director. In your letter,

  • explain your interest in the course
  • describe your problems
  • find out if a refund is possible

Task-2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write at least 250 words.

In the past, shopping was a routine domestic task. Many people nowadays regard it as a hobby.
To what extent do you think this is a positive trend?

Model answer
Task-1    

Dear Sir or Madam,

I’m writing this response to your advertisement on your website for a tennis course in Bath, England.

I have always wanted to play tennis so I’m very interested for joining the course; however, I do not have my own racquets and don’t wish to buy racquets at this time. Is it possible for me to hire racquets and balls during the duration of the course? Also I have poor eyesight and have to wear glasses all the time. I would like to know if your course is suitable for someone like me.

I’m afraid that I have to be back to Malaysia on 31st December so I am unable to stay in England for the whole three weeks. Is it possible for me to get a partial refund if I want to leave one week before the end of the course?

I’m looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,
Philip Wong

Task-2  

In recent years, the change in spending money to buy people's needs has occurred dramatically. As a result, it always will be a controversial topic whether it is a bad or positive trend relating to the shopping habit which has become a routine task and even a hobby. This essay, as my point of view, leads to, will try to come up with several considerations as I believe that an intermediate position can be taken relating to this issue.

 Shopping, that contradicts the topic regards, is a "nightmare" because the impacts which are dire & inevitable. Consumerism, in some ways, contributes bad things to the society as well as the civilizations. People who overcapitalize their money can spend their revenues in nothing and as a result, they suffer in managing their funding and try to borrow a big amount of money for just their basic needs. Psychologists argue that addiction in shopping which creates consumerism behaviour can lead to several criminal dire effects such as robbery and stealing.
However, without shopping and its relating things governments will face the problem in controlling the economy. The thing which can grow the Gross Domestic Products indicator is expenditures, especially the private one. Without increasing in this indicator, there will be severe implications which the economist called unemployment. The improvement of spending money indicates that people in the country are wealthy and also projects the prosperity of the nation which influences the corporations to produce products in high quantity as well as high quality. Throughout this trend, the employers will try to provide immense chances for people to get their job in the corporations. As consequences, spending in buying products, even it is a hobby or not, with larger portions helps economy matters indirectly.
To sum up, having considered the discussion above, I believe it will always create both positive and negative impacts, but shopping habit can be useful if the shoppers expend their money wisely.

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